Authors note: This is a personal narrative that I wrote about how i broke my wrist for the second time.
It all happened in a
matter of seconds. I was skating like a pro and then the next I was on the
floor with my wrist throbbing with pain. I look down at my wrist,
which was already turning purple with a big hard lump on one side. Then I
flashed back to last year, when I had broken my other wrist.
Purple, swollen, and a big hard bone that looked as big as an elephant.
Right then I knew it was broken. Once I realized it was broken for sure, tears
dripped out my eyes. For I finally felt the pain.
The pain steadily
scorched through my wrist up through my arm as I ran over to my mom to show her
my assortment of purple and blue blotches that speckled my wrist. After a quick
assessment, she told me that it was fine and that I hadn't breaking or damaged
anything. What? What is this? I know that I broke my wrist. I know what
if feels like. Not only the fact that my hand feels like it's being crushed by
an elephant, but my mom has the nerve to question my authority! How dare
her.
After a car ride home
that was awkward at the least, I tried explaining to my mom that
I truly was in overbearing pain and that I knew something
was wrong. After bickering back and forth, she finally gave up and drove me to
the doctor where I found that LIKE ALWAYS, I was right. In your face, mom. Even
though roller skating is exciting to do, I think I've learned my lesson on thinking I'm skating like a "pro" but
actually ruining my body in the process.
With
my shattered wrist and my anger at my mom, tears steadily rolled down
my eyes. From the pain to the thought that my mom didn't trust me to tell her
about my own pain. For her to even dare to think about me joking about my wrist
being broken when I am in pain. How could she? How could she not believe her
own daughter? I was furious at
her for a while. How could she? think her very own daughter was joking
when she is holding her dismantled wrist in her hand, with tears pouring down
her eyes? Who did she think I was the boy who cried wolf? Was that who I was to
her? Then I took some time to
get myself together and realized I was angry over nothing, really,
and that it was all just an accident.
But by the time I
realized this I was already in a cast and hadn't said a word to my mother in
about an hour. She knew that I was mad at her. Then I decided I needed to
apologize. She is my mother and may not always make the
best choices at first but in the end, everything was A-OK. So I gave
her a hug and said I was sorry and that it wasn't her fault that she
didn't believe me. But after all that was said and done, I secretly
knew that I was, in fact, a pro at skating.
This is really good Rose! I liked how you talked about your feelings and inner thoughts, it made this more relatable to other people. Good job!
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